This week i was learning about Bruce Mclaren.
I enjoyed making the facts about Bruce.
I found it challenging to find the facts.
Next time i will add his childhood picture's and find more facts about him.
Saturday 19 October 2019
Bruce Mclaren
This week i was learning about Bruce Mclaren.
I enjoyed making the facts about Bruce.
I found it challenging to find the facts.
Next time i will add his childhood picture's and find more facts about him.
Friday 18 October 2019
Recounts
Today my learning intention was to describe
In my success criteria I am going to
* use some long and some short sentences.
* use adjectives and adverbs.
* use juicy verbs to start a sentence.
* use a simile or a metaphor.
* keep to one main idea in each paragraph.
* edit for spelling and punctuation.
I found it hard to use a metaphor or a simile because I didn't understand what it meant.I found it easy to keep to one main idea in each paragraph.
" Whoo hoo! " I yelled as I rode on a roller coaster with my Dad. We were at a giant place in Palmerston North. It was amazing because there were heaps of bouncy castles and food to eat like candy floss ,candy, giant lollipops and heaps more.
After we drove to the playground and as I was about to touch the bark with my shoes. I hit the wood and fell down on the ground with a bleeding knee. So we had to sit down with a tissue over my knee and wait till it stopped bleeding. It was extremely painful so Dad and I went back at the motel.
In my success criteria I am going to
* use some long and some short sentences.
* use adjectives and adverbs.
* use juicy verbs to start a sentence.
* use a simile or a metaphor.
* keep to one main idea in each paragraph.
* edit for spelling and punctuation.
I found it hard to use a metaphor or a simile because I didn't understand what it meant.I found it easy to keep to one main idea in each paragraph.
" Whoo hoo! " I yelled as I rode on a roller coaster with my Dad. We were at a giant place in Palmerston North. It was amazing because there were heaps of bouncy castles and food to eat like candy floss ,candy, giant lollipops and heaps more.
After we drove to the playground and as I was about to touch the bark with my shoes. I hit the wood and fell down on the ground with a bleeding knee. So we had to sit down with a tissue over my knee and wait till it stopped bleeding. It was extremely painful so Dad and I went back at the motel.
Sunday 13 October 2019
Fizzy drinks
Is fizzy drinks healthy or not ?
I firmly believe that fizzy drinks are harmful to our
body. In fizzy drinks, there is a lot of sugar which is not good for our health. Some people may not like it or probably they are allergic to it. You can’t actually see the sugar because it’s gone all down to the bottom and dissolved in water.
In the coke, there are artificial colours and preservatives which can cause rashes on the face and make you feel not so good in your body. You can drink fizzy drinks once or twice in a month. But if you drink too much,you will start getting sick. If you don’t want to get sick, then avoid drinking fizzy drinks such as coke,sparkling, sprite etc.
Adults can drink fizzy drinks because they are strong,healthy and have developed their immune system. Children are still developing their immune system, so they should be careful when they drink fizzy drinks. To make our body healthy and strong we should prefer to drink water and fruit smoothies.
In conclusion, I will say water is healthier than fizzy drinks.
I firmly believe that fizzy drinks are harmful to our
body. In fizzy drinks, there is a lot of sugar which is not good for our health. Some people may not like it or probably they are allergic to it. You can’t actually see the sugar because it’s gone all down to the bottom and dissolved in water.
In the coke, there are artificial colours and preservatives which can cause rashes on the face and make you feel not so good in your body. You can drink fizzy drinks once or twice in a month. But if you drink too much,you will start getting sick. If you don’t want to get sick, then avoid drinking fizzy drinks such as coke,sparkling, sprite etc.
Adults can drink fizzy drinks because they are strong,healthy and have developed their immune system. Children are still developing their immune system, so they should be careful when they drink fizzy drinks. To make our body healthy and strong we should prefer to drink water and fruit smoothies.
In conclusion, I will say water is healthier than fizzy drinks.
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