Today I was writing a mystery story.
I found it hard to think of some words.
I found it easy to make the story up by myself.
Next time I will add more verbs and nouns.
On a wonderful morning, when I was about to have a cup of coffee, my phone rang. I answered it and it was Mrs, Aperahama. She said that there was a mystery case, somebody had stolen her chocolates from her table. I said “I am coming” and then I left the phone on my couch. I put on my best detective suit. Then I quickly headed outside. Outside, my best shining red Ferrari car was waiting for me. I jumped into my car and went to Saint Mary's School to investigate the mystery case. When I got there, I saw Mrs, Aperahama. She said that this case happened only thirty-seven minutes ago. I asked her “what kind of chocolates were they?”. She answered, “The brand of the chocolates was dairy milk”. Then I went inside the office and there were three teachers standing there. I asked them their names. They said “Miss McGuigan, Mrs B, and Miss Hickling”. One by one, I started asking them questions about the case. I started with the principal, Miss McGuigan. She said “I was on the sports department site, working on my computer when Mrs Aperahama came and started yelling “my chocolates, my chocolates, they are stolen”. When I was about to investigate from the next teacher, the bell rang and I had to let them go on duty.
During lunch, Mrs B came to me, while I was checking room 3. She said that there was something she had to show me. I followed her into room 2 and she pointed at the rubbish bin. I was about to say that you are just playing with me when I saw millions and billions of wrappers of dairy milk chocolates. I said, “wow, this is an awesome clue”. She also said,” when she was passing by room 2, she saw a teacher throwing chocolates in the bin.” I asked her if she saw her face. She said, “No, but the person was a woman that had blond hair”. I said, “Thanks for telling me the clue”. After lunch, I talked to Miss Hickling about a person throwing chocolate wrappers into room 2’s bin.
She didn’t say anything and looked very very worried. I said did you steal Mrs Aperahama’s chocolates? She said n-nn-nnn--nno-no. I looked at her very suspiciously and then finally she said, “Yes, I did do it”. Everybody was shocked. Then she told me that she had cravings for the chocolates, But I knew Mrs Aperahama wouldn’t let me eat her chocolates. That's Why I stole the chocolates.
So then the thief is……………. MISS HICKLING. The End.
Dear Detective Gurpuneet,
ReplyDeleteThank you for solving this case! Very interestingly most stories say it was Miss Hickling. I will keep a close eye on her in the future.
Ma te wa
Mrs Aperahama
Thanks for commenting on my blog Mrs A.
DeleteHa Ha I think the whole class will have to take a close eye on Miss hickling.
Ma Te Wa
Gurpuneet
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